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He arrived on the Ariel City with his little sister, Daylight Shire and their parents Queen Red Rose and King Guardian. How did they get on their trains so fast? There were lots of Elite Soldier/Guard lining up. Among them is Vortex Storm. Paladin felt really nervous coming out when he saw lots of guards and all the crowed wagons. When his little sister spoke up.
Daylight: Come on Bro! lets go we don't want to be missed ^^
Paladin: I don't want to, Daylight! There are so many ponies out there *being pushed by his sister*
Daylight: *pushing him* Come on bro! Mom and dad are waiting at the door over there *looks at their parents *
Guardian: Paladin, Daylight? Are you two ready?
Daylight: I'm ready dad ^u^
Paladin: Um, I guess I'm ready...
Red Rose: Don't worry son. You are going to be fine just stick close to me ^^
Paladin: Ok, mom...
When they steped off their private Royal wagons, he saw the frigate airship that was flying with many banners from the faction. The green symbol is from the Ranger Republic and the Red orange one is from the Sentinel Empire. He had never seen it before with his own eyes. He also saw a giant big gate. The big gate is an entrance to the Big stadium. Where sports games like the Olympics take place. He looked at his sister next to their dad while he still felt nervous and stayed close to his mother.
Red Rose: *watching him while he is behind her back * Don't worry son. Everything is all right.
Daylight: *next to her father and looking at his brother* Hey, Paladin? look at them there are so many Elite Guards and crowds of ponies
Red Rose: See, she is enjoying it!
Paladin: I think you're, right... *still being nervous*
Vortex: *holding her war axe* Welcome, your majesty to Ariel City. It would be my great honor to answer any questions you might have.
Guardian: Yes, I am here for the opening of the gates for the Diamond Games. We all wanted to see the sports, and the athletes.
Vortex: Ah, the Diamond Games for the Ranger, Sentinel and the Red thunder gaining peace by only one mare, Diamond Shire
Guardina: *nods his head* Yup, but we're going to start in 3 Months and 10 Days.
Vortex: Very well. Please follow me your majesty. I will lead you to your Royal room!
This is the Place for the sport games and celebrating peace between Ranger Republic, Sentinel Empire and the Red Thunder. They have been at war for a VERY long time since they were divided from the Ancient guardians. Ranger fought for peace, Sentinel for glory and the Red Thunder fought to destroy the othets and claim their land. But Diamond Shire discovered the tree of life and shot the mystery light on top of the sky and tried to stop the war. She gave them a peaceful speech and talked to their leaders. The three ended up joining the Diamond Empire. After that part they decided to build the city as a sign of union and the city was named, Ariel.
Vortex brought them to the Royal building. But then Paladin remember he saw all of his friends at the train station.
Paladin: Mom?
Red Rose: Yes, my son?
Paladin: I know this place is really big. So, can I let my friends... stay here aswell?
Red Rose: hm, very well they can stay
Paladin: Thanks mom ^^ *runs toward the train station*
Daylight: Wait for me, Paladin? D: *following him flying*
Paladin: *at the train station* Neo Fern ,High Night?
High Night: Paladin? hi
Neo fern: Hi, friends ^^ are you ready to watch the big games in 3 months and 10 days here?
Paladin: You bet I am ^^ but I am going to ask you guys
High Night: Really?
Paladin: I just asked my mom to let you two stay on the Royal Building ^^
High Night: *gasp* really?
Neo fern: Wow, we can stay there when the games are over too?
Daylight: Yup, just, right ^^
High Night: No way. Thanks so much^^ Welp going to head there right now ^^ *carrying the suit case* come on, Neo lets go
Neo fern: Right Behind you * follows him to the Royal Building*
When the both went to the Royal Building which is called Six Star Solar. Paladin and Daylight were at the train station waiting for all his friends to stay over at his place. When he saw them he asked them to come ad stay at the Royal Building. When he finally asked everyone but only one more was left, Sarina Ring. He knew that she was taking her time to get to Ariel. That's because she lives very far away from her city. At night he saw that her train is coming.
*train stops and the door opens*
Sarina: *stepps off from the train and looks at them holding her bags* Huh? Hi Paladin, my old friend^u^
Paladin: Sarina *runs to her and hugs her* I miss you friend!
Sarina: *hugs him back* I missed you to and hi Daylight ^^
Daylight: Hi, Sarina
Sarina: So why are you two staying out at night?
Paladin: Well, I was waiting for you to come to the Royal Building, which I did ask my mom, and she said yes ^^
Sarina: Aw, thanks ^^ you are very sweet to let me come to the Royal building ^^
Paladin: And yet I've asked all of my friends to stay there to ^^
Sarina: All your friends are at your place? That's going to be interesting *giggle* X3 Ok I'll be there ^^
She arrived and saw her old friends, Paladin and her sister that night. Then they helped her carry her stuff to the Six Star Solar. Daylight asked her brother to go to their room and go to sleep. When did he made it? he saw Star Chaser being chased by Aeon Light
Aeon: Did you feel the water, Star? *throwing water balloon at her*
Star Chaser: *trying to avoid the water balloon and hit on her face* Stop it, Aeon DX *continue running*
Sarina: Well, this is... um.. nice ^^
Paladin: Yup, they sure are :I
Lone Star *walking around while being hit by the water balloon* Oof, Aeon?! DX
Aeon: Come on! I am just having fun!
Lone Star: If you are having fun could you... uh... *watching her*
Aeon: Why are you looking like that? *turn his head around*
Star Chaser: Surprise, Aeon D:< *pour lots of water at his face*
Aeon: Eek D: *is already wet by her gallon of water* -_-
Star Chaser: I win, I win ^u^ * happy for hitting him with gallon of water* ^u^
Paladin: well I have to go and show my close friend to her room
Star Chaser: Ok, Paladin and we'll see you at morning ^^ right Aeon? ;D
Aeon: Don't ask -_-
When they both went inside and saw their friends wondering around inside the Royal Building. They had never seen a place as big, fancy and shiny before. When he got to the top of the stairs they saw, Sarry Tune looking at the Elite Guard
Paladin: Um, Sarry?
Sarry: Huh? oh hi Paladin, Sarina ^^ *continue looking at the Elite*
Paladin: Why are you looking at him like that?
Sarry: Well, I have never seen the Guard up close before
Paladin: Ok, but I think he is getting annoyed
Sarry: Oh, ok I'm going to stop staring at him, hehe ^u^;;;
Paladin: *went to the top room* here Sarina, here is your room ^^
Sarina: *looking at her really big room with lots of fancy stuff in there* This is very great. I have never stayed in a room that fancy. *went to the balcony* that's a very nice view up there *sees Aeon Light chasing Star Chaser and her him,"Stop it Star DX"* *sigh* well I am ready to see the big games here, right Paladin?
Paladin: Yup, ^^ but this is a great time to spend time with all of our friends
Sarina: Yeah, I'd love to meet all your friends and have a chance to spend time together ^^
Paladin: mHm ^^
Sarina: And I wanted to ask you something?
Paladin: Like what, Sarina?
Sarina: Well, you have grown up since we first met at the Diamond Kingdom and made so many friends haven't you ^^ when I'll meet them I am sure they are really great and awesome for your friends you've made. I am very happy that you've made so many friends ^^ and I knew you have lot of friends ^^
Paladin: Yeah... all thanks to my mom, who helped me, while I was very shy and hardly ever made friends
Sarina: You know your mother will always be with you anyway to help you. But it is very late now, you should take some rest to meet us at morning ^^
Paladin: Ok and night Sarina *ran to his room*
That how she told him about how he has grown up and made lots of friends. Thanks for his mother, Queen Red Rose. She always wanted to help him when his mother, was being alone at her palace by her self. But luckily she has her son Paladin her precious. She never let nopony hurt him and always care for him alot more.
Music I've listen
www.youtube.com/watch?v=GFYC8Q…
He arrived on the Ariel City with his little sister, Daylight Shire and their parents Queen Red Rose and King Guardian. How did they get on their trains so fast? There were lots of Elite Soldier/Guard lining up. Among them is Vortex Storm. Paladin felt really nervous coming out when he saw lots of guards and all the crowed wagons. When his little sister spoke up.
Daylight: Come on Bro! lets go we don't want to be missed ^^
Paladin: I don't want to, Daylight! There are so many ponies out there *being pushed by his sister*
Daylight: *pushing him* Come on bro! Mom and dad are waiting at the door over there *looks at their parents *
Guardian: Paladin, Daylight? Are you two ready?
Daylight: I'm ready dad ^u^
Paladin: Um, I guess I'm ready...
Red Rose: Don't worry son. You are going to be fine just stick close to me ^^
Paladin: Ok, mom...
When they steped off their private Royal wagons, he saw the frigate airship that was flying with many banners from the faction. The green symbol is from the Ranger Republic and the Red orange one is from the Sentinel Empire. He had never seen it before with his own eyes. He also saw a giant big gate. The big gate is an entrance to the Big stadium. Where sports games like the Olympics take place. He looked at his sister next to their dad while he still felt nervous and stayed close to his mother.
Red Rose: *watching him while he is behind her back * Don't worry son. Everything is all right.
Daylight: *next to her father and looking at his brother* Hey, Paladin? look at them there are so many Elite Guards and crowds of ponies
Red Rose: See, she is enjoying it!
Paladin: I think you're, right... *still being nervous*
Vortex: *holding her war axe* Welcome, your majesty to Ariel City. It would be my great honor to answer any questions you might have.
Guardian: Yes, I am here for the opening of the gates for the Diamond Games. We all wanted to see the sports, and the athletes.
Vortex: Ah, the Diamond Games for the Ranger, Sentinel and the Red thunder gaining peace by only one mare, Diamond Shire
Guardina: *nods his head* Yup, but we're going to start in 3 Months and 10 Days.
Vortex: Very well. Please follow me your majesty. I will lead you to your Royal room!
This is the Place for the sport games and celebrating peace between Ranger Republic, Sentinel Empire and the Red Thunder. They have been at war for a VERY long time since they were divided from the Ancient guardians. Ranger fought for peace, Sentinel for glory and the Red Thunder fought to destroy the othets and claim their land. But Diamond Shire discovered the tree of life and shot the mystery light on top of the sky and tried to stop the war. She gave them a peaceful speech and talked to their leaders. The three ended up joining the Diamond Empire. After that part they decided to build the city as a sign of union and the city was named, Ariel.
Vortex brought them to the Royal building. But then Paladin remember he saw all of his friends at the train station.
Paladin: Mom?
Red Rose: Yes, my son?
Paladin: I know this place is really big. So, can I let my friends... stay here aswell?
Red Rose: hm, very well they can stay
Paladin: Thanks mom ^^ *runs toward the train station*
Daylight: Wait for me, Paladin? D: *following him flying*
Paladin: *at the train station* Neo Fern ,High Night?
High Night: Paladin? hi
Neo fern: Hi, friends ^^ are you ready to watch the big games in 3 months and 10 days here?
Paladin: You bet I am ^^ but I am going to ask you guys
High Night: Really?
Paladin: I just asked my mom to let you two stay on the Royal Building ^^
High Night: *gasp* really?
Neo fern: Wow, we can stay there when the games are over too?
Daylight: Yup, just, right ^^
High Night: No way. Thanks so much^^ Welp going to head there right now ^^ *carrying the suit case* come on, Neo lets go
Neo fern: Right Behind you * follows him to the Royal Building*
When the both went to the Royal Building which is called Six Star Solar. Paladin and Daylight were at the train station waiting for all his friends to stay over at his place. When he saw them he asked them to come ad stay at the Royal Building. When he finally asked everyone but only one more was left, Sarina Ring. He knew that she was taking her time to get to Ariel. That's because she lives very far away from her city. At night he saw that her train is coming.
*train stops and the door opens*
Sarina: *stepps off from the train and looks at them holding her bags* Huh? Hi Paladin, my old friend^u^
Paladin: Sarina *runs to her and hugs her* I miss you friend!
Sarina: *hugs him back* I missed you to and hi Daylight ^^
Daylight: Hi, Sarina
Sarina: So why are you two staying out at night?
Paladin: Well, I was waiting for you to come to the Royal Building, which I did ask my mom, and she said yes ^^
Sarina: Aw, thanks ^^ you are very sweet to let me come to the Royal building ^^
Paladin: And yet I've asked all of my friends to stay there to ^^
Sarina: All your friends are at your place? That's going to be interesting *giggle* X3 Ok I'll be there ^^
She arrived and saw her old friends, Paladin and her sister that night. Then they helped her carry her stuff to the Six Star Solar. Daylight asked her brother to go to their room and go to sleep. When did he made it? he saw Star Chaser being chased by Aeon Light
Aeon: Did you feel the water, Star? *throwing water balloon at her*
Star Chaser: *trying to avoid the water balloon and hit on her face* Stop it, Aeon DX *continue running*
Sarina: Well, this is... um.. nice ^^
Paladin: Yup, they sure are :I
Lone Star *walking around while being hit by the water balloon* Oof, Aeon?! DX
Aeon: Come on! I am just having fun!
Lone Star: If you are having fun could you... uh... *watching her*
Aeon: Why are you looking like that? *turn his head around*
Star Chaser: Surprise, Aeon D:< *pour lots of water at his face*
Aeon: Eek D: *is already wet by her gallon of water* -_-
Star Chaser: I win, I win ^u^ * happy for hitting him with gallon of water* ^u^
Paladin: well I have to go and show my close friend to her room
Star Chaser: Ok, Paladin and we'll see you at morning ^^ right Aeon? ;D
Aeon: Don't ask -_-
When they both went inside and saw their friends wondering around inside the Royal Building. They had never seen a place as big, fancy and shiny before. When he got to the top of the stairs they saw, Sarry Tune looking at the Elite Guard
Paladin: Um, Sarry?
Sarry: Huh? oh hi Paladin, Sarina ^^ *continue looking at the Elite*
Paladin: Why are you looking at him like that?
Sarry: Well, I have never seen the Guard up close before
Paladin: Ok, but I think he is getting annoyed
Sarry: Oh, ok I'm going to stop staring at him, hehe ^u^;;;
Paladin: *went to the top room* here Sarina, here is your room ^^
Sarina: *looking at her really big room with lots of fancy stuff in there* This is very great. I have never stayed in a room that fancy. *went to the balcony* that's a very nice view up there *sees Aeon Light chasing Star Chaser and her him,"Stop it Star DX"* *sigh* well I am ready to see the big games here, right Paladin?
Paladin: Yup, ^^ but this is a great time to spend time with all of our friends
Sarina: Yeah, I'd love to meet all your friends and have a chance to spend time together ^^
Paladin: mHm ^^
Sarina: And I wanted to ask you something?
Paladin: Like what, Sarina?
Sarina: Well, you have grown up since we first met at the Diamond Kingdom and made so many friends haven't you ^^ when I'll meet them I am sure they are really great and awesome for your friends you've made. I am very happy that you've made so many friends ^^ and I knew you have lot of friends ^^
Paladin: Yeah... all thanks to my mom, who helped me, while I was very shy and hardly ever made friends
Sarina: You know your mother will always be with you anyway to help you. But it is very late now, you should take some rest to meet us at morning ^^
Paladin: Ok and night Sarina *ran to his room*
That how she told him about how he has grown up and made lots of friends. Thanks for his mother, Queen Red Rose. She always wanted to help him when his mother, was being alone at her palace by her self. But luckily she has her son Paladin her precious. She never let nopony hurt him and always care for him alot more.
Music I've listen
www.youtube.com/watch?v=GFYC8Q…
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Apple
Model
iPad mini
Shutter Speed
1/24 second
Aperture
F/2.4
Focal Length
3 mm
ISO Speed
64
Date Taken
Mar 24, 2017, 1:01:18 PM
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Wow, great as always. Good job on their armor, yo.