MLP: Paladin with his armor (Redraw)

Sorry for the photo I've took look bad there, which I can't see alittle when I draw D: when I draw it, right? my eyes was blurry DX though a few hour later? my eyes is ok now when I take look of my drawing there ;u; Anyway here is the redraw from my old drawing from last years ^^ which I've make it colorful, detail, shade and stuff I've did ^^ which is look alot better from my old drawing ^u^ and here is my old drawing though paladin360.deviantart.com/art/… also here is his story ^^ PS: this is a full story there ;D which the old drawing is half story while I was shy and nervous about my story look weird or whatever you people going to say about my story :c

The armor was made in the Diamond Citadel in the past when Paladin was still a colt in his royal room. His mother knew then that the old enemy might come back someday. She traveled on the royal train to the citadel and asked the blacksmith pony inside the palace to create a special armor for her son, Paladin.

The Sentinel of Citadel's original name for their own empire was Sentinel Empire. When Paladin discover from his parents room. He was wanted to visit his parents room and remembering from his past he. He say the book shelf and wanted to take it, but? the secret door from the bookshelf was open. Which is the Armor from her mother book shelf. He taking closer look and saw her note*

Red Rose: My dear, this is a gift for your armor. I know you really needed it to protect yourself from the another war. And please becareful. Remember. We always protect you and always be with you of our spirit...

Paladin: *his tear is coming out* Thanks mom. And I'm promise everything to protect my home empire...

A music I've listen
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