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Thunder Strike, living in Cloud Citadel. That city is a capital city of the Red Thunder. He was the best flyer and wanted to become a elite flyer of the Thunder bolts. But? he use to living in the Diamond Kingdom while he was a colt. He hang out with his best friends, Neo Fern they both knows each other when they at school in the class room. Later when the school was over? They began to hang out at the outside from the Royal Palace.

Neo Fern: It is great we both being outside for a fresh air ^u^
Thunder Strike: Me, too, Neo
Neo Fern: So, Thunder? when you growing up? what would you be?
Thunder Strike: Easy question you ask. I wanted to join the Thunder bolts and become a Elite Flyer 
Neo Fern: Huh, That big for you to join those Elite Flyer you wanted to become
Thunder Strike: Yeah, which is my dad was once a Elite Flyer. Which he... retired. And that is why I wanted to be with him and be the best flyer :D
Neo Fern: That good ^^ but? you have to train yourself to fly fast, though, you know that, right?
Thunder Strike: I know. I always do everything to join them. Speaking of which? what do you do when you grow up Neo?
Neo Fern: Well... I wanted to be a Diamond Royal Guard. Which I've heard the Sunset town is being occupied by the Skeleton war...
Thunder Strike: Oh... well that good you wanted to be Royal Guard to go there to protect them, right?
Neo Fern: Yup, I've heard lots of Diamond Soldier is marching the Sunset town for well protected and never make mistake again. Even though? my cousin is there to when the Skeleton lord attacking the town...
Thunder Strike: Wait? your cousin is living there while Skeleton attacking?
Neo Fern: Yup...

When Neo Fern continue talking about his cousin was living there while the Skeleton invade the Sunset town. Which he never forget what his cousin face there. Then Later when the sun is going down and went back home to hang out some more. He began to fly to his house.

Thunder Strike: *open the door and close. Walking at the kitchen* Hi Mom
Drift Cloud: Mr? where are you gone too? I was waiting for you all day DX
Thunder Strike Oh, um... you see...
Drift Cloud: *sigh* I already know. You were hang out with you friends, isn't it?
Thunder Strike: Um... yeah heheh ^~^;;;
Drift Cloud: Well, next time? please come home early, ok son? your dinner is cold, right now when you been out a long time
Thunder Strike: *saw his dinner on the table and being cold* oh :I
Drift Cloud: But it is night time, though... but you lucky you have no school tomorrow, though ^^ but I have to go to sleep anyway. I have work to do
Thunder Strike: Ok mom, night ^^
Drift Cloud: night, sweet heart don't eat the dinner while being cold ^^ *went up the stair to her room*
Thunder Strike: Ok :D I guess... *watching his dinner still* heh, going to warm my food... *went to the microwave and make his food warm and take out. Putting his table and began to eat* That was good ^u^ *sigh* I have to clean the dishes, right ;u; 

He don't like to clean the dishes, but he has no choice to clean. When he finish? he began to walk to his room and laying down on the bed. Dreaming about being the Elite Thunder bolts to help everypony on the Diamond Empire, what his best friends told about the Skeleton War.

Tomorrow later, he woke up and left the house fast when his mom about to say good morning to him. When he saw Neo Fern waiting for him at the Royal Palace

Thunder Strike: Hey Neo :D
Neo Fern: Hi, Thunder ^^ what it taken so long?
Thunder Strike: Eh, I overslept ^-^;;;
Neo Fern: huh Ok then ^^ let *hear somepony hoof step* Who's there?
Paladin: Oh, um.. Hi... sorry for... interrupting you two... hehe *being nervous* ^~^;;;
Thunder Strike: Ugh, you shouldn't sneak by us there DX which we though we getting in trouble when we in the Palace D:
Paladin: Oh, sorry ^^
Neo Fern: Ok, so why are you here?
Paladin: Uh... I just saw him while he was flying fast. So I just wanted to check him out what's going on ^^
Neo Fern: *is starring at him* -.-
Thunder Strike: *watching him* What?
Neo Fern: *sigh* well you are here so who are you? we love to make new friends, right, Thunder?
Thunder Strike: Yup, ^^
Paladin: Oh, ok. I'm Paladin and you are?
Thunder Strike: Nice to meet you, Paladin. And I'm Thunder Strike and he is Neo Fern. My best friend ^u^
Paladin: Nice to meet you Thunder and Neo ^^ I love to make new friend so, watcha doing right now anyway?

When he began to talking to new friends and become there friends. Hour later when the sun is coming down. Neo fern, and Thunder Strike was shocked when he was a prince while he told them. Later when they all glow up? Neo fern become a Royal Diamond Guard and saying goodbye to him and good luck for joining the Elite Thunder bolts. When he say goodbye? he went to the train with other Diamond Soldier is marching on the train and live. Than Thunder Strike saying good bye to his best friends and fly to the Cloud Citadel to meet his commander to train as the Elite Thunder bolts, is Lighting Bolts.

Meanwhile in the further future, by message
Thunder Strike: Hey, buddy? We shall them who boss, from the second war, right? heh, they can't beat me while I fly faster then them. And you should see there faces. Skeleton Dragon, tried to burn me up, but he can't!!! which I getting little bored and finish him up, which is... you don't really wanted to know anyway. But guess what when the Second war is truly over? I become a Elite Flyer. That is my dream come true. Which is my dad saw me and proud of me what I become a Elite. Also another, thing? I'm glad I'm meet you here with my best friend, Neo. You are the great pony and tried to help other pony, while your other friends, Golden Peach told me about it. And Sarina, too. Which I'm glad I'm met you're other friends. Well bye and have a great time :D *ended message

Paladin: *in the Dark room starring his friend message letter*

Paladin friends from OC backstories

M=Mare                                 P= Pegasus

S=Stallion                              U= Unicorn
E= Earth

(M)(E) 
Sarina Ring (living in Diamond Hope City) (She first met him while she walking around on the park when he being fall) [She use to live in Diamond Kingdom]
(S)(U) Aeon Light (living in Diamond Hope City) (He second met him during at midnight and wake him up while his music is very loud) [He use to live in Diamond Kingdom]
(S)(E) Old West (Living in Diamond Western) (He third met him while on rodeo in the Diamond Kingdom)
(M)(U) Star Chaser (living in Diamond Sunset town) (She fourth met him while she taking a walk at night, by herself without any friends)
(M)(E) Sarry Tune (living in Diamond Falls) (She Fifth met him while she on top on the rock playing some flute) [She use to live in Diamond Sea Shore City]
(M)(U) Golden Peach (living in Diamond Falls) (She sixth met him while she's needed help gathering peach)
(S)(E) Neo Fern (living in Sunset town) (He seventh met him while hanging around with his friend Thunder strike at the Castle) [He use to live in Diamond Kingdom]
(S)(P) Thunder Strike (living in Cloud Citadel) (He eighth met him while hanging around with his friend Neo Fern at the Castle) [He use to live in Diamond Kingdom]
(M)(U) High Night (living in Sunset Town) (He ninth met him met while he in the middle of the night, watching the star)
(S)(P) Cirrus Cloud (Living in Hurricane city) (He tenth met him when he being nervous alot and never talk to no pony alot)
(M)(E) Judy (Living in Diamond Rose City) (She eleventh met him when she is very shy and afraid) 
(M)(E) Madame June (Living in Diamond Hope City) (She twelfth met him at the stage in the Royal Palace)

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Model
iPad mini
Shutter Speed
1/30 second
Aperture
F/2.4
Focal Length
3 mm
ISO Speed
32
Date Taken
Mar 6, 2017, 1:29:09 PM
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Finity-Splatter's avatar
I love his mane!!! ^^